Animal Farm Evaluations

Sidney
-poem
I really liked Sidney’s poem, they layout of hers was really different from mine, just looking at the poem it was very visually appealing. I also like how she didn't keep the same pattern through the whole poem, it made it a lot more interesting to read and not predictable.

Leanna
-art work
Leanna’s was creative and different from alot of people the way she drew her own pig, instead of just Photoshopping one she found on the internet. I think she does a really good job at showing the parallels from the Russian Revolution to Animal Farm, clearly linking Napoleon to Stalin, and the animals to the people under Stalin’s control.

Adora
-poem
Adora had a great deep poem! She brought up something you don't think about really when reading the book, that the animals actually had some idea of what they were getting themselves into. This is a great poem by the way it was written, and the really great topic it was about.

Emma
-video
This video was really creative, and with the music and speaking and the video itself, you can tell that she put a lot of time and effort into it. I thought it was funny how they made it all dramtic, sounds like it would be a good movie!

Kelsey
-comic strip
This project was very different than all the others, it was all about the windmill, and didn't really show anything about all the other important aspects of the book. The artwork was good though!

Emily
-tower of power
Of all the projects that were very similar, I think Emily’s was one of the stronger ones. She drew all her own pictures and labeled them, I also think she did a good job of putting everyone where they needed to be by class level.

Talia
-tower of power and relationships
WOW! Talia’s project was great. I think it was really cool how she wrote that paper too, because that’s what she is interested in in real life, so I really liked how she was able to tie something she is actually interested in into a project like that.

The Phantom Blog (not sure who it actually is)
-comic strip
This is a really well put together project! It looks like a ton of time was put into making it look really nice. The chart in the end is super clever and all the pictures are really good!

Dan
-comic
Dan’s project is again, very unique. It focus's in on the bad things the pigs did, and uses good artwork and labels to show that.

Davis
-paralleling artwork
Davis does a nice job of showing very clearly how Animal Farm is directly related to the Russian Revolution. He brings up all the important parells in the book.

Hailey (me)
-poem
I think compared with people in my class, my poem was pretty good. It's hard to compare a poem to everybody else’s because they are different, but I know I put a lot of time and effort into it. Also I think everybody did really good work, and besides some outstanding projects (Talia, Levi, ect.) I think my project was in the same quality levels as most peoples. I tried in my poem to show foreshadowing similarly as the book did (with the dogs) and I think by reading my poem you could say I understand the book.